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walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
edited March 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
you wouldn't have murder
without me, and though
the sand looks good on paper
i'll pick the sea
like all wide awake
only-children of sailors-
turned-carpenters-
turned-laid-off-
failures at failures hiding
from well-rounded tornadoes,
sweeping desks of
journalists
cannot explain how
we found the power
to wash the church
and yet the windows
remain stained
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  • walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
    *failures at failure hiding

    Oops.
  • pearljamgirl07pearljamgirl07 Posts: 792
    walden freeman wrote:
    you wouldn't have murder
    without me, and though
    the sand looks good on paper
    i'll pick the sea
    like all wide awake
    only-children of sailors-
    turned-carpenters-
    turned-laid-off-
    failures at failures hiding
    from well-rounded tornadoes,
    sweeping desks of
    journalists
    cannot explain how
    we found the power
    to wash the church
    and yet the windows
    remain stained
    nice ! and welcome to the board!!!
    "You're the eve of my destruction in the garden of fears"
  • walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
    Thank you for the kind words. I have a feeling that I'll be posting a lot of bitter and sad poetry in the coming weeks.
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