paper trail (of tears)

walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
these limbs have lost the ability to freeze
and to feel it coming
and to wave goodbye
but rescue is only one ship away
where hands like origami swans folding and unfolding in a breeze brought on
outside a speeding car window
bibles burn on the doorstep of every citizen tonight
icicles hang from our elbows as our frozen hearts have pumped blood so cold into our veins that our sweat has hardened
and hardened us
our palms are planting trees
palm trees are bow to hurricanes
any saviors available should make their way here now
we have only a few minutes to die
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  • these limbs have lost the ability to freeze
    and to feel it coming
    and to wave goodbye
    but rescue is only one ship away
    where hands like origami swans folding and unfolding in a breeze brought on
    outside a speeding car window
    displace the ballots and shake one another in fear
    while bibles burn on the doorstep of every citizen tonight
    icicles hang from our elbows as our frozen hearts have pumped blood so cold into our veins that our sweat has hardened
    and hardened us
    our palms are planting trees
    palm trees are bow to hurricanes
    any saviors available should make their way here now
    we have only a few minutes to die



    ****I somehow managed to copy this wrong from my notebook. This is the correct rendition.
  • GrasshopperGrasshopper Posts: 137
    very nice...chilling peice of work. Nice job Mr. freeman
    This guy wouldn't know magesty if it bit him in the face- Strong bad

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  • sarah vesarah ve Posts: 43
    Beautiful.
    See you at the beach!! 6/17

    ~Those who believe absurdities will commit atrocities~
    -Voltaire
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