Oppositions

redmosquito10

When the wave retreats, does the land really think it has won?
When the land fails to crumble, does the sea believe the fight is done?

Who guaranteed the sun will rise again
Who made us believe light and dark cannot be passing trends?

Where the ocean meets the shoreline
The dawn must struggle to begin to shine.

Oppositional forces thrive in the fight
Oppositional forces will destroy all that is right

chadwick

that's pritty crafty.
i like it, but not all of it.
you are on to something big-time.
it's deep, that i like.
well done.

redmosquito10

thanks a lot. i actually had the same exact thought that i was onto something with this train of thought, but couldn't quite finish it at the time. This poem is based off of a line in another poem I wrote that I've always enjoyed, so if anyone would like to expand on what i wrote or take some of the sentiments and make them their own, be my guest.