Hey Jim.

Purple PuppyPurple Puppy Posts: 149
Did you kill any poets on your trip?
Were they doting and they give you the slip?
Were they gloating that you took a sip.
From the Devil's dip.
Hey Jim.
It dudn't make sense that you think you're so slick.
You're a trashy hick.
Hey Jim.
Yay Jim.
Ripped out the soul, it gave you lip.
Seems like you cost heaven's good grip.
Hey Jim.
You dim wit.
All you want from truth is a paid-for strip.
You morality hates you, have a conniption fit.
Signed it, grind it.
Corroding and foreboding.
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  • GrasshopperGrasshopper Posts: 137
    Take that jim...uuuughhh....
    Good job... I hope you didn't run through a wall after you wrote it..
    This guy wouldn't know magesty if it bit him in the face- Strong bad

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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    when i read this i was thinking jim morrison...

    ... when i was 16/17 i'd frequent this record store(which idtill frequent after 25 years). one day i picked up this book of morrison poetry and being an uncouth child, i just didnt get it. now being more mature i come at poetry differently and i read morrisons writings with a different mind. i dont always like what i read nor do i always get it, but at least now, i give it the chance all writing deserves. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Purple PuppyPurple Puppy Posts: 149
    Take that jim...uuuughhh....
    Good job... I hope you didn't run through a wall after you wrote it..
    I have tried that.
    Signed it, grind it.
    Corroding and foreboding.
  • GrasshopperGrasshopper Posts: 137
    Me too the wall always seems to win...unless you run through the door.
    This guy wouldn't know magesty if it bit him in the face- Strong bad

    www.myspace.com/lastgeneration56
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