Untitled Poem

JFS2003PoetJFS2003Poet Posts: 6
edited August 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Lost on the side of the road
throat burns from the drinking of sand.
Walk through six circles around her
as she weaves delicate crystals in hand.

The sun doesn't set or fall here,
In your mind sleeps the cloudless night.
All life that you've been through not chosen
but I've seen him lose all his fights.

He keeps up his pace with the storm,
but hangs back when he runs out of control.
Mind off in the distance forever
and his spirit wanders off alone.
Please let it rain today
the city is so filthy
like my mind
in a way
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  • #X.#X. Posts: 142
    That is the bestish line. It's Pearl Jam worthy!
    "The Poet is a madman lost in adventure."
    -Paul Verlaine-

    "With me poetry has not been a purpose, but a passion."
    -Edgar Poe-
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    nicely done oh drinker of the sand
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • haha thank you! ^_^
    Please let it rain today
    the city is so filthy
    like my mind
    in a way
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