Fucked up

urbanhippie
urbanhippie Posts: 3,007
edited September 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Headache
Heartbreak
Nothing more,
To take.

Sucked dry
Bone dead
Darkness,
In my head.

Empty
All gone
Just a shell
Made wrong.

Cracked glass,
My mind
Splintered
Dead inside.

Cold heart
Nothing left.
Blackness,
In my chest.

Fucked up,
That’s me.
The one thing
I can be.
A human being that was given to fly.

Wembley 18/06/07

If there was a reason, it was you.

O2 Arena 18/09/09
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  • eMMI
    eMMI Posts: 6,262
    wow, that's pretty powerful.. very intense.

    I like it. flows steadily and strongly.
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • urbanhippie
    urbanhippie Posts: 3,007
    Thanks eMMI. I never knew I could be so angry.
    A human being that was given to fly.

    Wembley 18/06/07

    If there was a reason, it was you.

    O2 Arena 18/09/09
  • eMMI
    eMMI Posts: 6,262
    urbanhippie wrote:
    Thanks eMMI. I never knew I could be so angry.

    I know the feeling. http://forums.pearljam.com/showthread.php?t=286923

    it's scary, strange.. but it's good to get it all out, eh?
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • Steve Dunne
    Steve Dunne Posts: 4,965
    wouldn't want to be on the wrong side of you!

    hope things turn around!
    I love to turn you on
  • urbanhippie
    urbanhippie Posts: 3,007
    eMMI wrote:
    I know the feeling. http://forums.pearljam.com/showthread.php?t=286923

    it's scary, strange.. but it's good to get it all out, eh?
    Not sure about it being good. It's kind of like picking a scab, it hurts and its ugly, but you can't stop.

    Btw I like yours too :)
    A human being that was given to fly.

    Wembley 18/06/07

    If there was a reason, it was you.

    O2 Arena 18/09/09
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    well done urban-badass-hippie

    that rocked
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • supersonicyears
    supersonicyears Posts: 2,619
    That would make a really great song
    "In the age of darkness
    want to be enlightened"
  • urbanhippie
    urbanhippie Posts: 3,007
    chadwick wrote:
    well done urban-badass-hippie

    that rocked
    Thank you :)

    Coming from you, that means a lot.
    A human being that was given to fly.

    Wembley 18/06/07

    If there was a reason, it was you.

    O2 Arena 18/09/09
  • urbanhippie
    urbanhippie Posts: 3,007
    TheBeach wrote:
    That would make a really great song
    Thanks :)
    Something thrashy maybe? Loud anyway.
    A human being that was given to fly.

    Wembley 18/06/07

    If there was a reason, it was you.

    O2 Arena 18/09/09
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    urbanhippie wrote:
    Thank you :)

    Coming from you, that means a lot.

    hugs :)
    your poem rules
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • KosmicJelli
    KosmicJelli Posts: 1,855
    I loved the way you felt when you walked into the door didnt even have to turn my head to know it was you....
  • KosmicJelli
    KosmicJelli Posts: 1,855
    FUUUUUUUCCKKKKKK!!! WHY do I need to keep yelling cant we have some serenity here?
  • eMMI
    eMMI Posts: 6,262
    urbanhippie wrote:
    Not sure about it being good. It's kind of like picking a scab, it hurts and its ugly, but you can't stop.

    Btw I like yours too :)

    well no, the moment of feeling angry isn't gooda and yes it's ugly.. but it's good to get it over with, you know? at least it helped me to put it in words cause it was easier to deal with then.

    thanks deerie. :)
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • urbanhippie
    urbanhippie Posts: 3,007
    eMMI wrote:
    well no, the moment of feeling angry isn't gooda and yes it's ugly.. but it's good to get it over with, you know? at least it helped me to put it in words cause it was easier to deal with then.

    thanks deerie. :)
    I'll let you know if it gets easier ;)
    A human being that was given to fly.

    Wembley 18/06/07

    If there was a reason, it was you.

    O2 Arena 18/09/09

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