angry love

yellowbird

i don't drink coffee
i don't drink tea
if you don't want me around
stop fuckin' with me

i felt you coming
like a warm summer breeze
dropped like a ton of bricks
you brought me to my knees

i prayed for you
i prayed for light
you came and you conquered
now i'm left here to fight

on my own, like before
nothings really changed
except a vision of what could have been
my mind is rearranged

God is my mercy
God is my grace
you better be there in the end
or i'll be really pissed

chadwick

i like it.
the ending is cool too.

madjack

Sometimes life is a bitch

justam

I hope you have some good luck.

yellowbird

madjack wrote:

Sometimes life is a bitch

and many times it is beautiful.

yellowbird

justam wrote:

I hope you have some good luck.

i don't believe in luck.
attitude, exceptance, happenstance, love, forgiveness, adventure, safety, faith, responsibility, self worth, beauty, freedom, pride, music, laughter, conversation, patience, balance, soul.
these are the things i believe in.

i was just frustrated when i wrote this.
"better out than in, i always say!"

yellowbird

chadwick wrote:

i like it.
the ending is cool too.

thank you, chadwick

i'd rather the ending go like this:

God is my mercy
God is my grace
i wish we were together now
and at last i could touch your face

but i'm not feeling very confident today

Jamal

Better in than out, and better that than nothing at all

feelings are the greatest gift, but also a poisoned one.

Very nicely done, yellowbird.
Would have wanted the ending to be better for you though
Make things change, make them !

madjack

Yellowbird I don't believe in luck, I do believe I am the creator of my own pain and the cure, as heartless as it sounds, I quit feeling love and now there is no pain. I love my kids but as for romantic love for someone its gone. I trusted when I should have not. Its not for everyone but it sure works for me.