yellowbird

yellowbirdyellowbird Posts: 184
there was something about his voice
that wouldn't let her go and it haunted her days
there was something in his eyes
she thought she'd seen before and she couldn't stop herself
soon she was smitten and every waking moment spent
thinking of him

and she prayed that long night
prayed for his soul
told him that she loved him
and she'd never let him go

she was left to fight her demons and she struggled to break away
the angels helped her battle and her mother was at her side
love conquered the darkness, but she was left breathless and unsure
trust is not an easy thing when left alone with your mind
she said too much to some at first, though they didn't understand
but now she is silent, although she is screaming inside

and she prayed that long night
prayed for his soul
told him that she loved him
and she'd never let him go

she walks on her own with her thoughts banging in her head
still thinking of the man that brought her to this place
wrapped in isolation, she goes about her daily life
they all think she's just fine and it's okay, it's okay
one day she will break free from this cage she is in
and she tries to dream of him and the day they will be together

and she prays at night
prays for his soul
tells him that she loves him
and she'll never let him go
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    yellowbird wrote:
    there was something about his voice
    that wouldn't let her go and it haunted her days
    there was something in his eyes
    she thought she'd seen before and she couldn't stop herself
    soon she was smitten and every waking moment spent
    thinking of him

    and she prayed that long night
    prayed for his soul
    told him that she loved him
    and she'd never let him go

    she was left to fight her demons and she struggled to break away
    the angels helped her battle and her mother was at her side
    love conquered the darkness, but she was left breathless and unsure
    trust is not an easy thing when left alone with your mind
    she said too much to some at first, though they didn't understand
    but now she is silent, although she is screaming inside

    and she prayed that long night
    prayed for his soul
    told him that she loved him
    and she'd never let him go

    she walks on her own with her thoughts banging in her head
    still thinking of the man that brought her to this place
    wrapped in isolation, she goes about her daily life
    they all think she's just fine and it's okay, it's okay
    one day she will break free from this cage she is in
    and she tries to dream of him and the day they will be together

    and she prays at night
    prays for his soul
    tells him that she loves him
    and she'll never let him go

    you are amazing.
    this is exactly how it has been for me more than once.
    you are a good writer.
    i can't wait to read more.
    thank you.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I hope you feel better after some time passes. It's awful to want someone you can't have. :(
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    so good yellowbird. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • yellowbirdyellowbird Posts: 184
    thank you
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    haunting work, very inspiring for me to read of this kind of love

    nice art
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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