deadnote

yellowbird

the words of faith and truth
are slipping from the page
images of love and beauty
they slowly melt away

love is forever
i know that you believe
seen it in your written word
your heart can't be deceived

the darkness in your words tonight
they frighten me a bit
i can't go there anymore
the pictures make me sick

sing of beauty
and sing of truth
a love never ending
that's what i like about you

deadnote

believe me i knew i was wrong when i wrote them
it is sick what i wrote and irresponsible and probably the writeful thing to happen to me would be a ban

i wouldnt want my family to read what i wrote and here i am writing this stuff and yellowbird i touched you in the wrong direction

i wish i could edit the disgraceful thread in question

im sorry to the members of this forum.

go to sleeping at last myspace and play umbrellas and thats how i really feel about this world.

chadwick

you'll be ok deadnote
your writing is great
you are great

chadwick

good work yellowbird
bigbird

deadnote

thanks to both of you.

yellowbird

deadnote wrote:

i wish i could edit the disgraceful thread in question
im sorry to the members of this forum.

i hope you know that i understand you were just expressing your feelings at that particular moment. i wouldn't want you to ever think you have to appologize for writing what you feel. believe me, i've felt the same at times and some of the stuff i have written here i've wished i could take back. but this is a could place to ....vent...release, whatever you want to call it.

i look forward to your writings. you are quite interesting.