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I hate it...

Johnny_NJohnny_N Posts: 60
edited April 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I hate it
hate the feeling
the feeling of something lost
something lost that was never found

I hate it
hate the days
the days that pass by
they pass by without you.

I hate it
hate the love
the love that I didn't get
didn't get what I held so dear

I hate it
hate your laugh
your laugh that makes me smile
a smile I can not share with you

I hate it.
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Comments

  • madjackmadjack Posts: 213
    Know that feeling man.
    Come on and play on the edge of life with me. Its fun and I love every minute of it!!!
  • MsaaberMsaaber Posts: 10
    You need to find that person again. That's a person you don't walk away from forever.
    "Life is not a race, but a journey to be savored"-Nancye Sims
  • MsaaberMsaaber Posts: 10
    Beautifully written, by the way.
    "Life is not a race, but a journey to be savored"-Nancye Sims
  • Johnny_NJohnny_N Posts: 60
    Thank you for your kind words
  • pearljamgirl07pearljamgirl07 Posts: 792
    I can relate to that.Good stuff
    "You're the eve of my destruction in the garden of fears"
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