Is she?

Johnny_N

Long time reader, first time poster...
First off, I've never been much of a writer... but 2 days ago I woke up, and just felt the need to write something...
Please feel free to laugh I dont understand it myself:

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Behind that face lies secret thoughts
they will never breathe the air
Her eyes is filled with anger
but her smile is filled with cheer.
Her feet follows the wind
swiftly across the pavement
I will never see her again
she's lost inside my thoughts.

She told me she would come
and look into my eyes
hours and hours I waited
but again she told me lies
Her voice is sweet as lime
eyes brigther than the sky
I wish that she was here
I wish that she was mine.

Now she's really gone
I dont know why she's lost
She's never to return
she fades away in my thoughts.

Was she really real?
Or was she mine alone?


Thanks for reading...
Pardon my english.

chadwick

i like it dude..thanks for sharing it..maybe you can try and get in touch with your inner flow and write more often..
im sure all of us in here enjoy writing..
its a release of feelings for me among other things..

electronblue

i like. write on...~

Johnny_N

Thanks guys, appreciate your replies

Another one I wrote the same day:

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When the sun stops shining
the darkness will come forth
and reaveal its strenght within
reveal its inner thoughts

I'm staring at the sky
and begging for the light
please free me from my sin
please free me from my mind

I'm locked inside a box
my thoughts they stray away
but wherever my thoughts will go
they'll all come back today.

jamjam

I don't want the light
Bring on the night
Cover me
and immerse me
Let me hide in
the depth of the night
Lack of light
no sun burn.