Ever again......

Johnny_N

this I wrote in about 2 minutes (seriously) ...
I got a hold of a story with a picture attached to it... this picture.. just takes makes me stare at it...
I had to focus extremely hard to take my eyes off it and close my web browser..

I will not post the picture (with the story here) unless you guys want to see it and read it... Its a disturbing picture with a 100% true story behind it...

This is what I wrote when I could rip my eyes off the picture.

At fist, its just a blur
but then it all comes clear
i'm looking at her
she really isnt there.

I keep staring at the emptiness
afraid to look away
Something disappears, my happiness
when can I again, see the day?

The thoughts in my head is spinning
I can not seem to place them
there's something very appealing
that draws me to this omen

I'm afraid to look at it again
Or I'll be lost forever
this girl is all my pain
Never I will look at this again......Ever....


Dont know how good the writing is... it just came to this

Jeanie

Very good.

Like the word picture you painted with the words. Nice work.