First Poem
pjfan85
Posts: 124
I've never written a poem and probably never will again. I threw this together while listening to the "Ongoing History of New Music". Tell me what you think, don't be afraid to say it sucks.
Is this a limited existence?
Is it just us here?
It's all because of your insistence
So don't show your fear
It'll make resistance stronger
they'll close the borders and man the air
the world won't last much longer
It's time to show your fear
It's not my fault the tide has risen
Ice caps melt and drown my sorrow
Sour honey turns to insense
You're tortured face really does seem listless
You're the spark that lights my fire
From up in the sky
to down in the ground
Don't tell me a lie
And you won't hear a sound
Try to turn it around
But, don't spoil it now
Don't fix it, 'cause it don't need fixing
Is this a limited existence?
Is it just us here?
It's all because of your insistence
So don't show your fear
It'll make resistance stronger
they'll close the borders and man the air
the world won't last much longer
It's time to show your fear
It's not my fault the tide has risen
Ice caps melt and drown my sorrow
Sour honey turns to insense
You're tortured face really does seem listless
You're the spark that lights my fire
From up in the sky
to down in the ground
Don't tell me a lie
And you won't hear a sound
Try to turn it around
But, don't spoil it now
Don't fix it, 'cause it don't need fixing
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"What a stupid lamb."
"What a sick, masochistic lion."
Why can I hear a voice freestyling this to a skat beat like Mike Myers in 'So I Married An Axe Murderer."
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