two poems at once the blending?

chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
edited December 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Touch it just to have it
To hold it more than a grip
The light in hand

Run all over
A train of strength through struggle
Not anyone will stand in the way
Life is my own
I am everything that I am, nothing less
Un-weak minded, determination

Iron-wall metal-curtain skull and bone
Do not say I cannot
Backbone brutal upright mother fucker
Bring on your fired up torches
I owe hell
Taking you there
Debt paid…
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."

Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    "Iron-wall metal-curtain skull and bone"

    That there is one tough mofo of a line, there, Chads.

    I like.

    Stay strong.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    Touch it
    Just to have it
    To hold it more than a grip
    The light in hand

    Run over all
    A train of strength through struggle
    Not anyone will stand in the way
    Life is my own
    I am everything that I am, nothing less
    Un-weak minded, determination

    Iron-wall metal-curtain skull and bone
    Do not say I cannot
    Backbone brutal upright mother fucker
    Bring on your fired up torches
    I owe hell
    Taking you there
    Debt paid…
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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