A September morning

chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
edited September 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
A September morning

Suspended bliss promises to stay forever and a day
At peace we have become quite calm
Tranquility weaves itself through us
We are wrapped in softened dreams
A window and a dewy morning’s spider’s web catches the sun for us
We have no worries, no fears
It’s what we give one another that makes us this way
And just like rain when we cry every dropped tear is from heaven
From day one you have been the one the one for me
For the first in my life I am shared with the sky
We are the epitome of friendship tried and true
A loving bond that is sung to us daily as both birds and sun rise to our greeting
We have it all
And this is only the beginning
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."

Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
Post edited by Unknown User on

Comments

  • chadwick, you write beautifully.
    i'm glad you are in love.
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    yellowbird wrote:
    chadwick, you write beautifully.
    i'm glad you are in love.

    yellowbird, you are still writing aren't you?


    and thank you very much for the compliment.


    im glad im in love to
    she rocks my fucking world
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • weedweed Posts: 475
    nice
  • dcfaithfuldcfaithful Posts: 13,076
    chadwick,
    You really do write with a sense of grace that I've never felt before. That poem was inspiring, and although I've never taken my lovely lady for granted...your words have just now given me an even higher and greater appreciation for the feelings that one can give another.

    Keep on loving man, I can feel your happiness in the presence of this poem.
    Thanks for sharing!
    7/2/06 - Denver, CO
    6/12/08 - Tampa, FL
    8/23/09 - Chicago, IL
    9/28/09 - Salt Lake City, UT (11 years too long!!!)
    9/03/11 - East Troy, WI - PJ20 - Night 1
    9/04/11 - East Troy, WI - PJ20 - Night 2
  • chadwick wrote:
    yellowbird, you are still writing aren't you?

    not much
  • *stunning*
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    dcfaithful wrote:
    chadwick,
    You really do write with a sense of grace that I've never felt before. That poem was inspiring, and although I've never taken my lovely lady for granted...your words have just now given me an even higher and greater appreciation for the feelings that one can give another.

    Keep on loving man, I can feel your happiness in the presence of this poem.
    Thanks for sharing!

    thank you kind Sir
    humbled i am

    your comments here is blowing me away
    i am totally thrilled right now

    i have an idea ;)
    go read it to your woman :)
    tell her its how youre feelin and stuff
    but i want details.....
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    thank you weed
    thank you my piece of clay
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    A September morning

    Suspended bliss promises to stay forever and a day
    At peace we have become quite calm
    Tranquility weaves itself through us
    We are wrapped in softened dreams
    A window and a dewy morning’s spider’s web catches the sun for us
    We have no worries, no fears
    It’s what we give one another that makes us this way
    And just like rain when we cry every dropped tear is from heaven
    From day one you have been the one the one for me
    For the first time in my life I am shared with the sky
    We are the epitome of friendship tried and true
    A loving bond that is sung to us daily as both birds and sun rise to our greeting
    We have it all
    And this is only the beginning
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
Sign In or Register to comment.