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Her eyes.

chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited November 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
You are an angel you know that!
An angel with the softest of eyes.
Oh I know I have never touched them with my own, I know.
But I have seen them in photographs and places where men dream.
Filling my dreams is when your soft stars from heavenly black fall over me, over me.
As I slip through imagines dreamt of you, only my heart races faster than I can fall.
I have fallen.
I have been caught.
In your arms now, take me in.
Our eyes meet, forever I am weak.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • geniegenie Posts: 2,222
    i think someone is in love ;):)
  • Astral StarAstral Star Posts: 129
    You are the happy Neruda of the Pacific Northwest! Nicely done Chadwick.
    "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to eachother." Mother Theresa
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Astral Star wrote:
    You are the happy Neruda of the Pacific Northwest! Nicely done Chadwick.

    I read this and was like, um, what the fuck is a Neruda.
    Looking in the closest-handiest dictionary I found zero for Neruda.
    So off I went strolling into my bedroom, grabbing my little backpack.
    This backpack is home to a big ass dictionary.
    Waiting for me inside these pages between nerts & Nerva I found Neruda.

    Thank you kindly for the mental excercise.

    btw, how the heck did you know/think of such a name?
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    genie wrote:
    i think someone is in love ;):)

    I do my best
    my friend
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Astral StarAstral Star Posts: 129
    chadwick wrote:
    I read this and was like, um, what the fuck is a Neruda.
    Looking in the closest-handiest dictionary I found zero for Neruda.
    So off I went strolling into my bedroom, grabbing my little backpack.
    This backpack is home to a big ass dictionary.
    Waiting for me inside these pages between nerts & Nerva I found Neruda.

    Thank you kindly for the mental excercise.

    btw, how the heck did you know/think of such a name?


    Pablo Neruda is a famous love poet from Chile who also happened to be a communist. Although he often writes from a depressing viewpoint about unrequited love. The film Il Postino is about his visit to a small village in Italy and I have a hunch from your writing you would really enjoy the flick!

    I was recording with a friend over the long weekend and he had one of Neruda's poetry books so I thought of him. Hadn't really read him since the 90's!
    "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to eachother." Mother Theresa
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    as always chad. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Thank you everyone for your responces.

    I'll have to check out this Pablo Neruda dude.

    Thanks.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Heather EversHeather Evers Posts: 168
    beautifully put!
    If I had known then...what I know now...

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