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pandora

a shit friend wrote:

raw, unpolished, unadulterated words written here for my soon to be ex, and my soon to be next. I shouldn't even post this shit, but Jesus and whiskey told me to, and i always listen to the voices in my bed.............


sometimes some things happen
and they're not what you expected
they're the kinda things that never cross your mind

you wake up with a feeling
that really sets you reeling
and you wonder just how long you have been blind

you touch her while she's sleeping
and she whispers something careless
the taste of her still lingers on your lips

and you tell yourself it's nothing
in the morning you'll remember
that the night is still the night and then it's gone

but the dawn brings back the moment
as you stare out of the window
and you realize how much you have to lose

so you make a pot of coffee
and you listen to the wind blow
and you go walking aimlessly along the shore

seems the space I've put between us
is just something to replace us
and the pain we've felt since each of us has gone

so I'm packin up my suitcase
and I'll see you in the morning
because..................

this is great! whiskey and Jesus does you well,
I can relate to this
"and you tell yourself it's nothing
in the morning you'll remember
that the night is still the night and then it's gone"
I listen to the voices in my bed too
thank you for sharing

PearlOfAGirl

a shit friend wrote:

raw, unpolished, unadulterated words written here for my soon to be ex, and my soon to be next. I shouldn't even post this shit, but Jesus and whiskey told me to, and i always listen to the voices in my bed.............


sometimes some things happen
and they're not what you expected
they're the kinda things that never cross your mind

you wake up with a feeling
that really sets you reeling
and you wonder just how long you have been blind

you touch her while she's sleeping
and she whispers something careless
the taste of her still lingers on your lips

and you tell yourself it's nothing
in the morning you'll remember
that the night is still the night and then it's gone

but the dawn brings back the moment
as you stare out of the window
and you realize how much you have to lose

so you make a pot of coffee
and you listen to the wind blow
and you go walking aimlessly along the shore

seems the space I've put between us
is just something to replace us
and the pain we've felt since each of us has gone

so I'm packin up my suitcase
and I'll see you in the morning
because..................

I missed your writing, good to have you back at it. :thumbup:

StillHere

serendipity
so its said
it will all work out
in the end
if its meant to be
things seemed so meaningless then
a fleeting moment in the sun
nothing more
nothing more
i was busy then
busy how?
busy with what?
busy with who?
i knew then
i thought i knew
until now
i wonder if
serendipity knows
where i live?
how to find me
cares enough to find me?
and if found
will i know?
will i recognize
fate
serendipity
this time around?

StillHere

once
birds
singing
sunshine
upon my face
my heart
beautiful days
trees swayed
warm-cool breeze
doves cooed
cozied
bushy tails
flitted
fresh earth
tiny treats
serve them
well
in
cool darkness
when air turns
once again

the mirror
reflected
deep
blue eyes
full of
wonder
awe
amazement
life
what ifs
hope
offering
tiny little wonders
every
precious day
freedom

today
now
forever?
blind
deaf
dull
quiet
nothing
exists
beyond
emptiness
alone
boredom
tired
so tired
of what?
oblivious
where
is
life?

trees
creatures
warmth
chill
breeze
blue eyes
still there?
would i notice
would i care
could i
if i tried?
no idea

forever
and no more

mikalina

Quando sei lontana sogno allorizzonte
e mancan le parole e io si lo so
che sei con me con me
tu mia luna tu seiw qui con me
mio sole tu sei qui con me

poesi che non ho mai

pearljgirl2010

HeartShapedBox wrote:

Will I ever find happiness? :roll:

ABSOLUTELY!!!!!!!!!!!

the wolf

if i had it all to do over again,
I'm not sure i would change much of anything..
which makes me a prick i suppose.
i'm not kidding,...
really, just ask... I'm sure you will be told.

chadwick

the wolf wrote:

if i had it all to do over again,
I'm not sure i would change much of anything..
which makes me a prick i suppose.
i'm not kidding,...
really, just ask... I'm sure you will be told.

i agree.
i wouldn't change much of anything.
prick

mikalina

If I had to do it all again ...

Other than a few mistakes I made along the way
I guess - I wouldn't change much either...

pandora

change something? that could set worse in motion, no regrets

Godfather.

Heartshapedbox are you doing alright ? your avatar worries me.

Godfather.

StillHere

mikalina wrote:

Quando sei lontana sogno allorizzonte
e mancan le parole e io si lo so
che sei con me con me
tu mia luna tu seiw qui con me
mio sole tu sei qui con me

poesi che non ho mai

even if something lost in translation, still lovely

StillHere

I think I need a real life

a shit friend

pandora wrote:

this is great! whiskey and Jesus does you well,

I don't believe in either one of em, but I use em when it seems appropriate.

Thanks for the comments, everyone.

justam

We finished the floor. whew. :P

supersonicyears

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pandora

Long Nights is playing, opened the front porch window to hear it better and the wind is picking up , wind chimes play to Eddie's beautiful voice, that is the most beautiful sound.

justam

Yeah, I think most of us fell in love with Ed's voice at some point. :geek:

StillHere

pandora wrote:

Long Nights is playing, opened the front porch window to hear it better and the wind is picking up , wind chimes play to Eddie's beautiful voice, that is the most beautiful sound.

It is the most gorgeous and relaxing sound in the world to me.

small town beck

I know that is all so fleeting but I can't wait to be in his arms again.