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Snake & Rat

chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited January 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Snake & Rat

My snake you are
Take me now
Wrap me in coils
Take me down
Taste me, your flickering tongue
Use my heat
Take me in

My snake you are
Take me now
Feast upon my flesh
Take me down
Have what remains
My blood you fed up it well
Take me in

My snake you are
Take me now
My lust hunger’s your bite
Take me down
Give me your den
Crawling inside you my skin
Take me in
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Once again you leave me in awe.
    It like, I do (yoda ;))
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Jamal wrote:
    Once again you leave me in awe.
    It like, I do (yoda ;))

    thanks Jamal.
    you're not the only one who's in awe.
    i too am in awe, in awe of the snake.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    chadwick wrote:
    Snake & Rat

    My snake you are
    Take me now
    Wrap me in coils
    Take me down
    Taste me, your flickering tongue
    Use my heat
    Take me in

    My snake you are
    Take me now
    Feast upon my flesh
    Take me down
    Have what remains
    My blood you fed up it well
    Take me in

    My snake you are
    Take me now
    My lust hunger’s your bite
    Take me down
    Give me your den
    Crawling inside you my skin
    Take me in

    flippin editing........
    Snake & Rat.

    My snake you are
    Take me now
    Wrap me in coils
    Take me down
    Taste me, your flickering tongue
    Use my heat
    Take me in

    My snake you are
    Take me now
    Feast on my flesh
    Take me down
    Have what remains
    My blood you fed upon it well
    Take me in

    My snake you are
    Take me now
    My lust hunger’s your bite
    Take me down
    Give me your den
    Crawling inside you my skin
    Take me in
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • #X.#X. Posts: 142
    chadwick wrote:
    flippin editing........
    Snake & Rat.

    My snake you are
    Take me now
    Wrap me in coils
    Take me down
    Taste me, your flickering tongue
    Use my heat
    Take me in

    My snake you are
    Take me now
    Feast on my flesh
    Take me down
    Have what remains
    My blood you fed upon it well
    Take me in

    My snake you are
    Take me now
    My lust hunger’s your bite
    Take me down
    Give me your den
    Crawling inside you my skin
    Take me in


    Hey Chad, Just feedback. I don't know this for fact, but when I think of the snake I think of it as a masculine symbol. Kinky huh! The mysterious #X.
    "The Poet is a madman lost in adventure."
    -Paul Verlaine-

    "With me poetry has not been a purpose, but a passion."
    -Edgar Poe-
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    #X. wrote:
    Hey Chad, Just feedback. I don't know this for fact, but when I think of the snake I think of it as a masculine symbol. Kinky huh! The mysterious #X.

    yikes.
    their must be a message inside
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    #X. wrote:
    Hey Chad, Just feedback. I don't know this for fact, but when I think of the snake I think of it as a masculine symbol. Kinky huh! The mysterious #X.

    I agree with the mysterious #X. although I don't think of rats as being feminine, considering that most of the rat bastards that i've known were males ;):)
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
  • LindaLinda Posts: 1,656
    #X. wrote:
    Hey Chad, Just feedback. I don't know this for fact, but when I think of the snake I think of it as a masculine symbol. Kinky huh! The mysterious #X.


    http://chinese.astrology.com/snake.aspx
    i'm not happy yet.....
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    #X. wrote:
    Hey Chad, Just feedback. I don't know this for fact, but when I think of the snake I think of it as a masculine symbol. Kinky huh! The mysterious #X.

    Yes, I thought it was the body part too. :p
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    justam wrote:
    Yes, I thought it was the body part too. :p

    get your mind out of the gutter justly, mind out of the gutter.

    reminds me of a Dangerous Toys tune "broken bones in the gutter"
    ner ner na ner = a guitar noise.

    ;)
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    chadwick wrote:
    get your mind out of the gutter justly, mind out of the gutter.

    reminds me of a Dangerous Toys tune "broken bones in the gutter"
    ner ner na ner = a guitar noise.

    ;)

    The gutter? :eek:
    That's not where they live! They are revered in my house. :)
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    justam wrote:
    The gutter? :eek:
    That's not where they live! They are revered in my house. :)

    as well as in my life, they are awesome.
    i wanted to study deeper into herpatology but didn't.
    before my neices and nephews were born I had a decent
    lil reptile zoo going on @ the house.
    poisonous snakes and babies probably shouldn't be together.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    chadwick wrote:
    i wanted to study deeper into herpatology but didn't.
    I had a decent lil reptile zoo going on @ the house.
    Well, that sounds like something you'd do :D
    chadwick wrote:
    poisonous snakes and babies probably shouldn't be together.
    Aw, common, where's your sense of adventure.... for heaven's sake, it could've been a terrific scientific experiment :p

    J/K: you just stick to moving us with your talent shown above. ;)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    justam wrote:
    Yes, I thought it was the body part too. :p


    a trouser snake? :p




    should I mention my talents as a snake charmer? ;)
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    prism wrote:
    a trouser snake? :p




    should I mention my talents as a snake charmer? ;)

    too F'ing funny.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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