You taste beautiful.

chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited January 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
You're wonderful this morning.
Your lips were tasted by the rising sun.
When this sun stood up cracking the sky above me,
I was kissed by a fire so beautiful I tasted you.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."

Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • did you taste me?
    did you notice my sweetness or my
    bitter after taste?
    did i linger or just fade away?
    will you remember me... i will remeber you
    I'm too young to be old and too old to be young; I just don't fit anywhere.

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  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    nice synesthesia, chadz ...
    that's some beautiful imagery righ there

    thank you, that gave me a nice start for the day
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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