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Blood drenched stars.

chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited May 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Onward, I am restlessness, vigorously disturbing.
My breath, repulsively vile.
You should recognize my barbaric ways.
Scarred, this unlived warlike flesh, I plead for more living misery.
I bring down the enemy of all millennia, past and future.
Light-years are mine.
I am carved deeply across blood drenched stars.
Ripping skies, grinded into useless grains, sand eyes blowing.
Oh but to tongue lash humanity in speaking flaming horror.
My only desire rots within all souls I conquer.
Out beyond sanity stirs my decaying-living realms in emotional screaming.
This haunting force towers over your twisting torn soul.
I am your own miraculous eternity without time.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    Vivid, love the imagery in this one.:)
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    ooh chad, very nice. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • red mozziered mozzie Posts: 35
    really like this one chadwick¡
    .. glad the drought has broken¡¡ (meaning: awesome to see you postin' again)
    hehe
    :D
    ~i wanna rise .. and say g'nite .. i wanna take .. a look on the other side~
    rEd mozziE
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    thank you everybody.
    it is quite a twist to my usual mushy stuff.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    You blew my socks off!! GREAT work!!!!!!
    Feels Good Inc.
  • henrocchenrocc Posts: 14
    beautiful
  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    awesome!!
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Chad-wicked ! (y)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Jamal wrote:
    Chad-wicked ! (y)

    Jamal, what is a (y) ?
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Sorry mate, was thinking of a thumbs-up on MSN :D
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • sweetpearlsweetpearl Posts: 2
    What a great piece. I'm particularly fond of the imagery and wording you've chose. You've set an atmosphere with just a few lines. Well done :)
    Laura
  • WanWan Posts: 18
    Uau....uau...it´s great...

    chadwick wrote:
    Onward, I am restlessness, vigorously disturbing.
    My breath, repulsively vile.
    You should recognize my barbaric ways.
    Scarred, this unlived warlike flesh, I plead for more living misery.
    I bring down the enemy of all millennia, past and future.
    Light-years are mine.
    I am carved deeply across blood drenched stars.
    Ripping skies, grinded into useless grains, sand eyes blowing.
    Oh but to tongue lash humanity in speaking flaming horror.
    My only desire rots within all souls I conquer.
    Out beyond sanity stirs my decaying-living realms in emotional screaming.
    This haunting force towers over your twisting torn soul.
    I am your own miraculous eternity without time.
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Thanks everybody.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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