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I love you.

chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited February 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
With your eyes you build me up.
I do need your touch, our meeting lips.
Sweet flowing hearts, long spring blooms.
Lying in grass, flowers in your hair.
Your warmest smile I wear.
You're so beautiful, touching you.
I love you.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    i think this is my favorite poem
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • Dylan StoneDylan Stone Posts: 1,145
    deadnote wrote:
    i think this is my favorite poem

    I love this.

    Makes me feel all warm and smiley. :)
  • geniegenie Posts: 2,222
    chadwick wrote:
    With your eyes you build me up.
    I do need your touch, our meeting lips.
    Sweet flowing hearts, long spring blooms.
    Lying in grass, flowers in your hair.
    Your warmest smile I wear.
    You're so beautiful, touching you.
    I love you.

    sorry guys i expected something more, to me it sounds a bit cheesy and unoriginal.
  • Dylan StoneDylan Stone Posts: 1,145
    genie wrote:
    sorry guys i expected something more, to me it sounds a bit cheesy and unoriginal.

    Yeah, huh?
  • madjackmadjack Posts: 213
    genie wrote:
    sorry guys i expected something more, to me it sounds a bit cheesy and unoriginal.


    Ouch!! Whats up with that, i thought it was good.
    Come on and play on the edge of life with me. Its fun and I love every minute of it!!!
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    It's just mushy ass chadwick that's all.


    btw..

    women, fuckin fantastic energy to feel, to be consumed in.
    currently, i am being devoured.
    she's the beautiful temptress dripping her own
    honey just across the tip of my tongue.

    dam it, it was just on the tip of my tongue.
    i mean, she was..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    I adore this one. it's profoundly warm-hearted and sweet :)
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    chadwick wrote:
    It's just mushy ass chadwick that's all.


    btw..

    women, fuckin fantastic energy to feel, to be consumed in.
    currently, i am being devoured.
    she's the beautiful temptress dripping her own
    honey just across the tip of my tongue.

    dam it, it was just on the tip of my tongue.
    i mean, she was..


    well you already know what i think of your soft centre chad. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • geniegenie Posts: 2,222
    chadwick wrote:
    It's just mushy ass chadwick that's all.


    btw..

    women, fuckin fantastic energy to feel, to be consumed in.
    currently, i am being devoured.
    she's the beautiful temptress dripping her own
    honey just across the tip of my tongue.

    dam it, it was just on the tip of my tongue.
    i mean, she was..

    i like this one, probably cause this poem is more sexual.
    nothing wrong with being mushy, i wanted to hear something about love :)

    From your 'I love you' i like this line "With your eyes you build me up"

    i didn't like to hear about flowers cause i'm fed up with looking at the flowers, especially in women's clothing. i didn't like to hear her being beautiful cause i hear men say it all the time. and lying on the grass reminded me of a tv commercial.

    i didn't want to be rude or anything, i was stating my opinion :)

    i think this song below is a good love song, i don't know what it is the lyrics or video, but i think this video is sweet.

    Puddle of mudd "Spin you around"
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z35ba-jSiEA&feature=related
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