Look up

chadwick

Electrical currents gravitating from you to me generate sweeping heat
This is our gaseous radioactive astronomy
We’re every nucleus, every core, and every moons sun
To be upward from down and downward from up we’re hourglasses twisted
Time has become our luminous shadow
We’re the black-hole of carbon-dated religion
And we implode stars with our kissing playground

ClutchTheDawn

with your use of the language, you always create a ton of imagery in very few lines
i like this

pearljamgirl07

chad...I'm glad to read this kind of things .keep on writing buddy you know how to do it:)