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Lose beyond.

chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited March 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Written when my brother went off to the other side.


Rambling death on earth.
Smell behind the door, a cloud thick.
Today, oh my god.
I am so sorry.
I am so sorry.
A daily life behind the door.
Misery in air.
Suffering holds in your eyes.
Wishes on my lips.
Lies, agony, and defeat thrown at you.
I am so sorry.
Where do I begin?
Where do I end?
Where does it end?
Death stands its boots here today.
Foul odor of lost hope.
Struggle and strain for a better tomorrow.
I am so sorry.
Against the world you ran.
Uphill candle a glow.
Burning both ends at once.
Run down life in a run down apartment.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    I love the depth of emotion in this. Simple sentences carry such weight. Great job.

    "Suffering holds in your eyes."

    "Against the world you ran."

    Awesome lines.
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  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    She of wounded beauty
    wasn't long for this world
    She played the vixen, the poet, and the clown
    She was none of those
    but I loved her
    and wherever she is, I hope she knows
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    and im sure she knows..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Nothingbetter wrote:
    I love the depth of emotion in this. Simple sentences carry such weight. Great job.

    "Suffering holds in your eyes."

    "Against the world you ran."

    Awesome lines.
    I ² that

    awesome work !
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    The sadness and regret are palpable. It's very striking, Chadwick.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    you all for your compliments..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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