You decide.

chadwick

I can feel your breath spinning around me, ocean winds.
When sipping sea water, your kiss I taste.
Onward but inward splashing us down, in we fall.
Waves open our full eyes, your smile, my visual.
All we could walk, sandy shore, a treasure seashell, you.
Hand of stick pen, names slip down, belong of sand.
Flow strong, run away, you are waves, taker and giver.
Among horizon, two color, but your are closer to one painting.
All fade, your talking sea tongue captures my heart, kissing lips consuming.
Dancing currents dance, moonlit sundown tides, whisper touching deeply.
My sea lover, ours.

Nothingbetter

I love the mix with the ocean, as that's what I equate to beauty and love as well. Love...washing over us.

Bu2

I can taste the ocean now. I like the style of this one, too. It's a little choppy, yet gorgeously fluid. Like the sea.

justam

I love reading things with emotional content like this. The words are kind of choppy, but it still brings the pink to my cheeks.

Bu2

By choppy, I meant that each line has several thoughts in it, separated by commas. It's not choppy in a discordant way at all. It's more like a rocking motion whilst reading.

chadwick

among horizon, two color, but your are closer to one painting..
um hello typo dude..

among horizon, two color, but you are closer to one painting..
speell chekc type oh dud..

thank you for your compliments..

Bu2

I didn't even spot that!!