Thank you for your soul.

chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited March 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
What you are about to read is extremely rare for me to write about..
dark poetry doesnt flow often inside me..ive only written a few..
im more into mushy type poetry, it's what i do..Like the others i write this one will be in my book/books..

Thank you for your soul.

Breathing in evil, I suffocate your life.
Holding your precious soul with dagger like teeth.
You’re falling into my skies, my realm of pain.
Torturing your spirit in eternal agony is where I dwell.
Your so called happy life has shutdown.
Your life was created for you to live numbered days.
Now is my game into your endless screams of misery.
Years into seconds, and centuries into minutes.
You will know true pain as you melt from my kiss.
Today is 10,000 years ago, and you’ve only begun to fall into my darkness.
I’ll pierce your mind with dull blunt terrorism.
Your worst fears I studied and mastered before your ancestors were conceived.
Nightmares you ran from, now I am breathing them down your throat for you to taste.
Wallow in madness, you’ll never sleep another moment of happiness.
Your time has become your clock of shredding gears.
5 lives high from heaven you’ll beg for forgiveness.
You will sink into the bowels of your very own hell you created.
The end forever is your pain.
Today I start my work on your soul.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."

Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    welcome to the dark side chadwick. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    but thats ok..haha..i like mushy, for me it flows, besides lotsa chics dig it..
    haha..(wink wink)
    dont get me wrong, chics dig dark poetry too..its just not what i can do often at all..its not my gig..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    I'd like to see more of your darkside Chad. Interesting art requires the disection of all feelings. (So, I've heard) I knew there was more going on with you than joyfull love and appreciation.
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    honestly i dont have but, and im not kidding, two i can think of right off hand..i'll have to search sum folders/files..other day i found a whole frickin thingy full of old poems i wrote long time ago..i'll sift thru em and see what i can find thats dark..in all honesty i dont flow that way..maybe i should try to channel sum dark feelings/emotion..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    we all have a dark side chadwick. it's just some of us choose to work with it rather than ignore it and pretend it doesn't exist.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    "And then you open a hotel..." - Sybil Fawlty


    ;)

    Like it, Chadwick!
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    oh i know we all have a darkside..what youre saying isnt surprising me..
    i dont hide it or ignore it..im only myself..thanks..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwick wrote:
    oh i know we all have a darkside..what youre saying isnt surprising me..
    i dont hide it or ignore it..im only myself..thanks..

    We wouldn't know darkness if we didn't know light,...and we learn so much about ourselves by exploring both.

    Cheers, chadwick!
  • TenJamTenJam Posts: 97
    I guess you won't be surprised when I say that I really like your darkside, chadwick! Thanks :)
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