(personal) Black hole.

chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited April 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Heavenly this hole of skies, a massive cavity.
But beautifully violent light rays are sound.
Inward, perhaps upward, reflecting my soul.
The struggling life I’ve lived below before now, a crumbled ticking clock.
Loud now this flight, I’m wingless, and how?
Finally mine are now my own, this freedom is all the way beyond hunger.
I’m colliding with stars to fill my own black hole.
Oh it is heavenly.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."

Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • chadwick wrote:
    Heavenly this hole of skies,...
    I’m colliding with stars to fill my own black hole.
    Oh it is heavenly.

    yes it is.

    traversing the astral plane to replenish spiritual & eternal aspects seems to be a lost art.

    ~p
  • whispering handswhispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    I absolutely LOVE this one.. so much so that i copied it down!!
    keep em coming!!
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    thank you ladies..i liked it myself..i appreciate both of your compliments..
    you both write very well..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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