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Dreaming of a goddess.

chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited June 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
As I go through my days and nights she is in my thoughts.
What a gift I see in her.
A rare quality in, of all, a treasure she is.
More than anything special, she is exactly that, more than everything special.
If she could only see me in the same light as I see her.
Then, only perfection would fill these lives.
Yea we are far from perfect.
But I see her as close to perfect as anything and everything possible to me.
One day I hope she can tell me she loves me.
Because I do love her.
How is this possible without ever looking into her eyes?
How is it possible to love her when I’ve never kissed her lips?
Her spirit attracts mine like a magnet.
With her we could be unstoppable.
She could be green, blue, orange, or striped.
I am only, and fully, interested in her for who she is.
She gives me my smiling heart.
This is my song I sing, her name.
Inspiring me like a star filled night, she does this so easily.
I have become a better man by knowing her.
It is her only way, it is herself.
I am humbled, and probably even weakened from her.
Yet with her, I am a super-hero for her to keep.
If in my eyes the most beautiful soul were near, always happiness.
I only ask for a chance.
May I please have this dance?
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    chadwick wrote:
    As I go through my days and nights she is in my thoughts.
    What a gift I see in her.
    A rare quality in, of all, a treasure she is.
    More than anything special, she is exactly that, more than everything special.
    If she could only see me in the same light as I see her.
    Then, only perfection would fill these lives.
    Yea we are far from perfect.
    But I see her as close to perfect as anything and everything possible to me.
    One day I hope she can tell me she loves me.
    Because I do love her.
    How is this possible without ever looking into her eyes?
    How is it possible to love her when I’ve never kissed her lips?
    Her spirit attracts mine like a magnet.
    With her we could be unstoppable.
    She could be green, blue, orange, or striped.
    I am only, and fully, interested in her for who she is.
    She gives me my smiling heart.
    This is my song I sing, her name.
    Inspiring me like a star filled night, she does this so easily.
    I have become a better man by knowing her.
    It is her only way, it is herself.
    I am humbled, and probably even weakened from her.
    Yet with her, I am a super-hero for her to keep.
    If in my eyes the most beautiful soul were near, always happiness.
    I only ask for a chance.
    May I please have this dance?

    the end.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i liked that chad. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    i came back to read it, again...~
    ********************************
    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    This one is very romantic. :)
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    thank you for reading it, enjoying it, and for your nice compliments.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Definitely worth the read !

    Thanks for this one, it seems to reflect my situation perfectly...

    Love can make ya smile
    make ya cry
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • red mozziered mozzie Posts: 35
    luRv the line 'she gives me my smiling heart'
    a sweet read chadwick, thanks¡
    :)
    ~i wanna rise .. and say g'nite .. i wanna take .. a look on the other side~
    rEd mozziE
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    Chaddles! Another great effort. And I like that you renamed it. :)

    I love Mama Cass's version of Dream A Little Dream of Me. :)

    Yup, the world is definitely a better place for your word songs chad, me dear. Thank you. :)
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    yall are awesome.
    thanks.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • korbykorby Posts: 298
    thats how i feel about Jill Mcormick
    its ok
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    dunno who jill is
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    chadwick wrote:
    dunno who jill is
    http://images.google.be/images?q=jill+mccormick&hl=nl&safe=off&um=1&sa=X&oi=images&ct=title
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • kerri_luckerkerri_lucker Posts: 5
    let's dance,.... i'm game ;D
    chadwick wrote:
    As I go through my days and nights she is in my thoughts.
    What a gift I see in her.
    A rare quality in, of all, a treasure she is.
    More than anything special, she is exactly that, more than everything special.
    If she could only see me in the same light as I see her.
    Then, only perfection would fill these lives.
    Yea we are far from perfect.
    But I see her as close to perfect as anything and everything possible to me.
    One day I hope she can tell me she loves me.
    Because I do love her.
    How is this possible without ever looking into her eyes?
    How is it possible to love her when I’ve never kissed her lips?
    Her spirit attracts mine like a magnet.
    With her we could be unstoppable.
    She could be green, blue, orange, or striped.
    I am only, and fully, interested in her for who she is.
    She gives me my smiling heart.
    This is my song I sing, her name.
    Inspiring me like a star filled night, she does this so easily.
    I have become a better man by knowing her.
    It is her only way, it is herself.
    I am humbled, and probably even weakened from her.
    Yet with her, I am a super-hero for her to keep.
    If in my eyes the most beautiful soul were near, always happiness.
    I only ask for a chance.
    May I please have this dance?
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    kerri_lucker wrote:
    let's dance,.... i'm game ;D

    i dont dance to swell i can tell you that.
    but i try, and i try real frickin hard.
    if you don't mind your toes stepped on sometimes.
    or yourself coated in drool.
    if that stuff is cool with you, then a dancing we will go.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • AbookamongstthemanyAbookamongstthemany Posts: 8,209
    Oooh, that is simply beautiful, chadwick!
    If you want to tell people the truth, make them laugh, otherwise they'll kill you.

    Man is least himself when he talks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth.
    -Oscar Wilde
  • kerri_luckerkerri_lucker Posts: 5
    chadwick wrote:
    i dont dance to swell i can tell you that.
    but i try, and i try real frickin hard.
    if you don't mind your toes stepped on sometimes.
    or yourself coated in drool.
    if that stuff is cool with you, then a dancing we will go.

    i think your moves are just fine doll.
    trying your best is all anyone can ask of you
    i dunno about the drool
    but maybe we can work thru that???
    kewl? lats dance... the night away...
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    kerri_lucker wrote:
    i think your moves are just fine doll.
    trying your best is all anyone can ask of you
    i dunno about the drool
    but maybe we can work thru that???
    kewl? lats dance... the night away...

    you're to good.
    and funny.
    squish squish squash goes your toes.
    ooops, sorry.
    im drooling again, wipes it on my sleeve.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    i like this. very sweet and powerful. hope when the dream comes true you still feel this way and let it be known to her everyday
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    pacifier wrote:
    i like this. very sweet and powerful. hope when the dream comes true you still feel this way and let it be known to her everyday

    i intend too.
    it's a beautiful thing.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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