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Falling sun into love.

chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited June 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Be with me.
I’ll meet you out there.
You know where.

And a setting sun’s downfall before us, bursting lips kiss.
Distance in eyes, near in hearts.
Colors clashing in vividness of ballet brilliance.

Be with me.
I’ll meet you out there.
You know where.

Touching your soft-face is floating cloud fingertips painting delicately.
This beauty I hold, compare, I can not.
But skies melting aglow holds our candle for songs we sing.

Be with me.
I’ll meet you out there.
You know where.

Only silk, your flesh so warm.
Love you, drops down firelight into perfection.
Love me, star filled passions holding onto what is ablaze.

Be with me.
I’ll meet you out there.
You know where.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhh.
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    superbeautiful poem
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • AbookamongstthemanyAbookamongstthemany Posts: 8,209
    lovely as always :)
    If you want to tell people the truth, make them laugh, otherwise they'll kill you.

    Man is least himself when he talks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth.
    -Oscar Wilde
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    aah, thanks chaddles. another stunner! :)

    do so love your work. :)
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    ...just when I think you've blown our minds away,

    you do it again.

    e.e.cummings ain't got nothing on you, Chads.

    Nothing.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    You are all beautiful.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • OutshynedOutshyned Posts: 55
    chadwick wrote:
    This beauty I hold, compare, I can not.


    Omg that's awesome. Wow.
    "I guess it was the beatings... made me wise
    But I'm not about to give thanks, or apologize"

    The other day the above lyrics hit me like they never had before.......Almost dizzying....So true, feelings i long recognise summed up in words so beautifully/perfectly.....
  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    <3<3<3 ...~
    ********************************
    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


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