Captivated under her spell.

chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
Red softer colored than that of my blood, your impaling lips.
You ran through this flesh, my torn dripping heart stains a cold gem floor.
Trapped inside towering stone charm, I begged of you, kiss me sorceress.
Full skies blackened as beauty is your eyes, star filled playgrounds are my sight.
Tonight is eternity, fatal affections from you, forever mine.
Candles control a dancing shadow, one, only one.
Enslaved all my manhood, you have.
Not even freedom sleeps among dreams.
You have collected my desires for pleasures unheard of in the darkness of time.
More of your endless lust craved body will pour over mine like boiling orgasmic honey.
And another burnt rising sun promises me I am deeply inside of you exploding.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."

Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    Wowzer!...~
    ********************************
    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • EastofEdenEastofEden Posts: 75
    chadwick wrote:
    Red softer colored than that of my blood, your impaling lips.
    You ran through this flesh, my torn dripping heart stains a cold gem floor.
    Trapped inside towering stone charm, I begged of you, kiss me sorceress.
    Full skies blackened as beauty is your eyes, star filled playgrounds are my sight.
    Tonight is eternity, fatal affections from you, forever mine.
    Candles control a dancing shadow, one, only one.
    Enslaved all my manhood, you have.
    Not even freedom sleeps among dreams.
    You have collected my desires for pleasures unheard of in the darkness of time.
    More of your endless lust craved body will pour over mine like boiling orgasmic honey.
    And another burnt rising sun promises me I am deeply inside of you exploding.

    I could be reading into, but that last line has some sexual innuendo :D

    Seriously, this piece is good.
    Great form and content.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    So subtly is the fume of life designed
    to clarify the pulse and cloud the mind
    and leave us once again, undone.. possessed.

    ...
    Be yourself- those who mind dont matter
    and those who matter dont mind.
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    you make the blood boil.....in a very, very nice way.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • Astral StarAstral Star Posts: 129
    Stunning weave of the loss of control coupled with cravings we find so often in lust and love. Wonderful!
    "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to eachother." Mother Theresa
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Thank-you everyone for the compliments.
    They are great.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • EastofEdenEastofEden Posts: 75
    chadwick wrote:
    Thank-you everyone for the compliments.
    They are great.

    Yeah, compliments feel good, huh.
    Critisism sucks though...ouch.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    So subtly is the fume of life designed
    to clarify the pulse and cloud the mind
    and leave us once again, undone.. possessed.

    ...
    Be yourself- those who mind dont matter
    and those who matter dont mind.
  • Oh my. Is it hot in here?


    Very nice, chadwick
    If you want to tell people the truth, make them laugh, otherwise they'll kill you.

    Man is least himself when he talks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth.
    -Oscar Wilde
  • . . . I have a semi!
    "The legacy of Surrealism after 1968 must surely follow artists, writers, thinkers and activists who are committed to the power of the unconscious and to the imagination of other possible worlds."

    - Alyce Mahon
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