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Sweet Serendipity

Ms SilhouetteMs Silhouette Posts: 60
edited July 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Funny how the world works
Great trials, sweet serendipity
A world of grief and anger
'til you appeared by me

I didn't see you coming
Wasn't looking, but just the same
You marched right in, smiled at me
And you took away my pain

My rock, you're constant comfort
In this ever changing life
Your support and love mean everything
In good times and in strife

Each day I struggle to articulate
Just how much you mean to me
But know I'll keep attempting
So I can make you see

Remember despite the baggage
My mind is focused, my heart is true
No matter what the word serves us up
I'll always be loving you
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    yep... sweet sweet honey in the rock. loved this one. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Ms SilhouetteMs Silhouette Posts: 60
    Thanks cate. :) Sweet honey in the rock? HA! :D

    It's so nice to be inspired by some kind of wonderful for a change. :)

    Oh and how cool when you have those serendipitous moments come into your life! :cool:
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Ms Silhouette wrote:
    ...
    Oh and how cool when you have those serendipitous moments come into your life! :cool:

    indeed it is.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Rock onRock on Posts: 216
    I like this one as well. :)
  • TrixieCatTrixieCat Posts: 5,756
    Rock on wrote:
    I like this one as well. :)
    Me too.
    :)
    I know how difficult it is to put into words these intense feelings you can have...and struggle and feel so dumb. Why can't I put into words how I feel?
    Or when you can't answer because you are just in awe of what someone has said or how they have made you feel.
    And you just sit there...fingers poised and you don't know what to do.
    Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
    And I don't feel right when you're gone away
  • Ms SilhouetteMs Silhouette Posts: 60
    Rock on wrote:
    I like this one as well. :)

    Thank you so much. I'm really glad you like it. :)
    TrixieCat wrote:
    Me too.
    :)
    I know how difficult it is to put into words these intense feelings you can have...and struggle and feel so dumb. Why can't I put into words how I feel?
    Or when you can't answer because you are just in awe of what someone has said or how they have made you feel.
    And you just sit there...fingers poised and you don't know what to do.

    Thank you. :)

    I have quite a bit of trouble getting the words out. I'm fairly sporadic in my writing efforts. Dwell on things for a long time before I'm able to put them on the page. What I find is that if I commit to writing something, anything every other day, somehow, the words come out eventually. I think that's why I admire those who post more regularly than I, because they write every day, increasing their proficiency and talent as they go. :)
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