Are you even listening to me?

Ms SilhouetteMs Silhouette Posts: 60
edited April 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I worry about you girl,
I really do
Do you even know what you are doing?
It's been ugly, fetid, stifling, malicious
Unbearable pain for too long
To grieve or to rage or both?
I understand
So hard to find the light
Move toward joy
Regain equilibrium
Somehow wash the sins from you
Still too many questions
But do you really think this is the answer?
Why are you grabbing onto it?
Clutching at straws
Clinging to it like a life raft.
Maybe there are no answers
You might never know
Probably will never know
You want to move forward
I get that
Maybe it's too soon
Are you really ready?
Don't you still sometimes catch a whiff of the odour?
Some days, don't you still feel your broken heart?
It takes time you know
To stitch these things back together
Rebuild from the ashes
Are you really ready or just indulging your denial?
I worry about you girl
Are you even listening to me?
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i don't think she should listen to you. ;):p i think she should just do it and ride that wave whereever it takes her. and don't ever forget there's nothing logical about emotions. :)

    p.s nice poem ms s.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • It's so nice
    "You're the eve of my destruction in the garden of fears"
  • i don't think she should listen to you. ;):p i think she should just do it and ride that wave whereever it takes her. and don't ever forget there's nothing logical about emotions. :)

    p.s nice poem ms s.


    Thanks cate. :) Of course she did that wave thing and all she got was dumped by a big one and very nearly drowned so I don't know? Maybe she could paddle back out again, we'll see what happens I suppose. It is hard to find your feet sometimes but I don't think she's listening to me anyway. ;)

    You're right though, I think there's a distinct lack of logic in the air of late.
  • It's so nice

    Thank you. :)
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