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Forget, Remember When

BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
edited April 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
If you ever weren't yourself
I don't know what I'd do
It would feel like something was amiss
That it just wasn't you
So though I curse your name at times
stomp my feet and cry
Please don't change a thing my love
I'll always be your guy
"Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    sweetness dz. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Brainofdz wrote:
    If you ever weren't yourself
    I don't know what I'd do
    It would feel like something was amiss
    That it just wasn't you
    So though I curse your name at times
    stomp my feet and cry
    Please don't change a thing my love
    I'll always be your guy

    nicely done dude.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    nice.
  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    jamjam wrote:
    nice.

    When I saw your name, I was bracing for the worst.
    a sincere compliment from jamjam?
    I must have done something good in a past life.
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    Brainofdz wrote:
    When I saw your name, I was bracing for the worst.
    a sincere compliment from jamjam?
    I must have done something good in a past life.


    i told you once long ago
    you didn't know me...
    and yes you must have done something good somewhere down the line.
  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    jamjam wrote:
    i told you once long ago
    you didn't know me...
    and yes you must have done something good somewhere down the line.

    well, I wouldn't mind knowing you jamjam
    and thanks for the kind words
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    no problem.
    you have a good friend on this board
    who thinks well ofyou.
    so thank him.
  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    Thank You mystery friend
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • red mozziered mozzie Posts: 35
    Brainofdz wrote:
    If you ever weren't yourself
    I don't know what I'd do
    It would feel like something was amiss
    That it just wasn't you
    So though I curse your name at times
    stomp my feet and cry
    Please don't change a thing my love
    I'll always be your guy
    aww .. that was sweet¡
    ~i wanna rise .. and say g'nite .. i wanna take .. a look on the other side~
    rEd mozziE
  • marker_in_the_sandmarker_in_the_sand Posts: 272
    this is really cool
    I don't want to be the fool that's behind me but I am...

    I'll Hold The Pain... Release...

    Yourself
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    nice poem lots of good writings here
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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