Ode to You

AnnaMelindaAnnaMelinda Posts: 331
edited January 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Breeding karma
Like yeast in a prostitute
...roaches in the projects

Sharp tongued
Knife wielding
Passive Man

Says nothing
wrong.

Walks smugly
Brooding
Breeding
self destruction
Disguised as self preservation

Emotion free
Bad energy
Vibing like maggots on swine

Breeding karma
...Peace to your mother
Breeding karma
...Love to your soul
Lost deep inside your head
sometimes life don't leave you alone
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i like this one
    bends around all curvy and kinda deep
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • It's one of my favorites...
    sometimes life don't leave you alone
  • Dylan StoneDylan Stone Posts: 1,145
    I like the imagery. Simple yet very descript and deep...

    Nice work. ;)
  • hey...I reaLLy enjoyed this.

    Uber!
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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