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AnnaMelindaAnnaMelinda Posts: 331
edited January 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
So…..There is this love

This love I have for you

This love I want and need to share with you

I love making love to you

And want and need you so badly



There are so many things….



I trust you with my heart

I turn to you when I’m sad

You’ve taught me so very much



I admire you….

The man you’ve grown to be

The life you have made for yourself

Your energy conscious, left-thinking mind

Your beautiful heart

Your sexy, dirty, passionate, intense libido



Your creativity and imagination are incredible

You’re smart, intense, and bold

And…you’ve taught me so very much



I cry to you and tell you anything…everything

I’m not afraid to….

No one knows me like you do

No one has ever seemed to accept me the way you do

You’ve taught me so much about strength, courage, love, forgiveness and friendship



I am very lucky to have you in my life

You always are and always have been so kind to me

I trust you with my heart



And….even if you did hurt me…

I know you wouldn’t let it hurt too bad…



I love your style, your way, your you.
sometimes life don't leave you alone
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  • AnnaMelindaAnnaMelinda Posts: 331
    So…..There is this love
    This love I have for you
    This love I want and need to share with you
    I love making love to you
    And want and need you so badly

    There are so many things….

    I trust you with my heart
    I turn to you when I’m sad
    You’ve taught me so very much

    I admire you….
    The man you’ve grown to be
    The life you have made for yourself
    Your energy conscious, left-thinking mind
    Your free thinking, free spirit
    Your beautiful heart
    And your sexy, dirty, passionate, intense libido

    Your creativity and imagination are incredible
    You’re smart, intense, and bold
    And…you’ve taught me so very much

    I cry to you and tell you anything…everything
    I’m not afraid to….
    No one knows me like you do
    No one has ever seemed to accept me the way you do
    You’ve taught me so much about strength, courage, love, forgiveness and friendship

    I am very lucky to have you in my life
    You always are and always have been so kind to me
    I trust you with my heart

    And….even if you did hurt me…
    I know you wouldn’t let it hurt too bad…

    I love your style, your way...your you.
    sometimes life don't leave you alone
  • Dylan StoneDylan Stone Posts: 1,145
    I think this is beautiful. ;)
  • skinnylegsskinnylegs Posts: 112
    Waaay nice. You're super talented!
    "Those who dance are called insane by people who don't hear the music."
  • AnnaMelindaAnnaMelinda Posts: 331
    Thanks for the kind words. :)

    The person I wrote this for should be receiving it in the mail tomorrow. I hope he likes it as much as you.

    He will. He truly is an awesome person....and after all these years I am certain he is my best friend. How many years...across how many miles and how many different life paths can you keep on winding up with the same person....declaring your love...before you just give in to what is obvious.

    xo
    sometimes life don't leave you alone
  • deadnothingbetterdeadnothingbetter Posts: 2,202
    suppafreak wrote:
    Thanks for the kind words. :)

    The person I wrote this for should be receiving it in the mail tomorrow. I hope he likes it as much as you.

    He will. He truly is an awesome person....and after all these years I am certain he is my best friend. How many years...across how many miles and how many different life paths can you keep on winding up with the same person....declaring your love...before you just give in to what is obvious.

    xo
    the dude's got you whipped... :D
    This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
  • AnnaMelindaAnnaMelinda Posts: 331
    deadnothingbetter wrote:
    the dude's got you whipped... :D

    Dude...You're not kidding. I'm in big trouble. ;)
    sometimes life don't leave you alone
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    yeah it is beautiful.
    you did a good job with this.
    the dude is all smiles im sure.

    i've written boxs full, never received one.
    waiting....
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • AnnaMelindaAnnaMelinda Posts: 331
    chadwick wrote:
    yeah it is beautiful.
    you did a good job with this.
    the dude is all smiles im sure.

    i've written boxs full, never received one.
    waiting....

    Thank you so much!!!!

    I hope it makes him smile....I haven't heard anything yet...but I think I'm just nervous. The guy lives in LA...Is travelling for work...woke up in New Mexico...was getting flown back to LA...and then leaving for Salt Lake.

    So...Well...He was hoping to get people to work it out so he could NOT stop home. Don't know if that happened...as I'm not going to call!

    Really need to read my own poem and not be nervous.

    Ughhh...And I'm in New York.

    And so it goes. :);)
    sometimes life don't leave you alone
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