better me

Mercy4BercyMercy4Bercy Posts: 3
edited January 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
pictures painted while dreaming in my bed
dreams of brush strokes and brushed chords
playing out a Symphony, notes arrange so brillantly
creative powers flow, not eb
a residual image of how i want to be,...
pitty it's a lie i see
just vision of a better me
locked inside, this constrained head
not enough time to jump and to fly
forever walking the path in front
desires that drove now dog my every move
opportunities not taken now are closed doors
the size of which have begun to deny
can i be the me i want,...
better me
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    pritty decent
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    nice poem

    im trying to find the self that is honest as love is true

    without the notion that the reader is nudging fallacy

    or flattery

    so im happy tonight

    and is love is love love
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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