I'd like to see everyone else's take on this..

whispering hands

Please ya don't have to ryhme, just for soome stupid reason I feel the need to.. but I'd like to see where you all go with these lines... feel free to ad.

Clouds of emotion block out the sun.
Once the light disappears, shadows weigh a ton,
When the fear starts showing, it's time to run.
Burying your memories is like loading a gun

seconds and minutes all turn to days,
Once again I've kept the razors at bay.
A bane, yet a comfort, my fears never stray,
In these hours of torture I've learned to pray.

jboelhow

whispering hands wrote:

Please ya don't have to ryhme, just for soome stupid reason I feel the need to.. but I'd like to see where you all go with these lines... feel free to ad.

Clouds of emotion block out the sun.
Once the light disappears, shadows weigh a ton,
When the fear starts showing, it's time to run.
Burying your memories is like loading a gun

seconds and minutes all turn to days,
Once again I've kept the razors at bay.
A bane, yet a comfort, my fears never stray,
In these hours of torture I've learned to pray.

So walk till the pain of it dies
let go of the people's passing ties
If it leaves a battle scar
It only shows how far we are

whispering hands

to qoute Ed... Fucking beatiful