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whispering handswhispering hands Posts: 13,527
edited December 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Digging around inside my soul,
Gnashing teeth take their toll.
Razor blades let blood roll,
While gaping wounds engulf me whole.
A constant daze I'm always in,
Carving my fears onto my skin.
Deadly rage; count to ten,
My revenge will soon begin.
Twisting, turning, and writhing I cry,
Covered in blood; stucked pig hung high.
The clots are thick; rotted from lies,
When I wake up, should I open my eyes?
Are these the dreams that shake a child,
Waking in sweat, with the bed all riled?
Some seem so dangerous; other so mild,
Where did it come from, how deep is it filed?
When I lie in bed, my tears all dried,
Shivering beneath the sheets I hide.
Into such depths I should not have pried,
For now I'm afraid of whatever's inside.
Confusion's roots, forever will grow,
Tears may well up, but will never show.
I could run, but where would I go?
From now on rest I'll never know.....
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  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    Trent Reznor would love to have written that
    and that doesn't even cover how cool that piece was
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    how do you do that..i am in awe..that is amazing..thank you for posting it..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • PerceptualPerceptual Posts: 200
    Well written. In fact it's @$%*& ^&%@ #%#ingly well written. I thank thee.
    "this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

    NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
  • TenJamTenJam Posts: 97
    That's something way too amazing, thanks!
  • whispering handswhispering hands Posts: 13,527
    whoooofucking hooo I found this piece again!!! I've managed to lose the paper copy in the flood we had last year!! So glad that I remembered that I'd posted it on here all those years ago!! Thanks TC for holding onto this one for me!!
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    this forum has saved a few lost pieces for me over the last year,... close to 50 when my laptop crashed and for some reason i hadn't written them down in my notebook.

    this is really good by the way.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • whispering handswhispering hands Posts: 13,527
    thank you.. I may just catalogue my whole plethera of work on here!! lmao you poor people that'd take a while, and alot of space..but so glad I'd posted it on here it's one of my favorites.
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