ducktape
henrocc
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streets are Russian roulette with points spread.
victims are held down and force fed
go to school with danger
reason with human behavior
identities are passed around
i.p. addresses are hunted down
and the sounds that I seem to choke on
are the memories that I got broke on
arguments
referencing what the fuck do we do now?
victims are held down and force fed
go to school with danger
reason with human behavior
identities are passed around
i.p. addresses are hunted down
and the sounds that I seem to choke on
are the memories that I got broke on
arguments
referencing what the fuck do we do now?
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As for what we do now?
Welcome to the Forum!
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
thanks for sharing it.
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
One thing, though...I'm not sure you meant the title to be a pun or not. Usually, it's spelled duct tape. So if you meant duck tape, as a twist, then that's cool. Otherwise, it should be duct.
Again, it's great work. I look forward to seeing more. Please don't take my critique harshly, I'm just anal about spelling (when I'm not drunk, that is).
Peace,
Bu
just ducky!