look

luckymanluckyman Posts: 25
edited March 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i look at my life one day at time
i know one day it will all be so nice
today is tomorrow
yesterday is today
wonder if i can open or close
maybe i will be a new man
who knows
the window may open
or the door be shut
i do not want to close it just yet
so look and look yet again
but no look do i see
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i like this..ive wrote my version of these same feelings several times myself..i dont know the titles of em tho but if i find em i'll share em on here..you did a good job..thanks for sharing it with us..grab life by the balls and run with it..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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