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desires

PerceptualPerceptual Posts: 200
edited November 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
a man sees love before his time
or so it would seem
the future reaches forward
to deny this desire
twisting out of reach
caught in an updraft of fear
swept out of existence

never again to align with the fire of love

when hope will not survive
a dream cannot be feared
this desire is too strong to break
under the weight of his burden
forever alone will he reside
alone with his desire

never again to align with the fire of love
"this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
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  • madjackmadjack Posts: 213
    For me that fire burns too hot, not going to burn again. I'll end up alone like I began.

    Good writing, thanks.
    Come on and play on the edge of life with me. Its fun and I love every minute of it!!!
  • geniegenie Posts: 2,222
    Perceptual wrote:
    a man sees love before his time
    or so it would seem
    the future reaches forward
    to deny this desire
    twisting out of reach
    caught in an updraft of fear
    swept out of existence

    never again to align with the fire of love

    when hope will not survive
    a dream cannot be feared
    this desire is too strong to break
    under the weight of his burden
    forever alone will he reside
    alone with his desire

    never again to align with the fire of love

    our desires is what keeps us alive
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