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a poem I guess

PerceptualPerceptual Posts: 200
edited January 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
sweet laughter
inspired
what a fine line
to be hardly inside those eyes
what to see
how to perceive
hours involving happiness
days we spent in each other's arms
all gone
"this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    couldnt read it
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Perceptual wrote:
    sweet laughter
    inspired
    what a fine line
    to be hardly inside those eyes
    what to see
    how to perceive
    hours involving happiness
    days we spent in each other's arms
    all gone

    memories linger
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • in_hiding79in_hiding79 Posts: 4,315
    I like this one!! :)
    And so the lion fell in love with the lamb...,"
    "What a stupid lamb."
    "What a sick, masochistic lion."
  • PerceptualPerceptual Posts: 200
    chadwick wrote:
    memories linger

    Cheers Chadwick. I originally had 'memories fade' as the last line, but that was the word I was looking for. Good stuff.
    "this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

    NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
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