fight to sleep

PerceptualPerceptual Posts: 200
edited January 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Just a short one... my brain is a little fried lately.

even nothing can be said to find
moving images that hope to never die
unlike these walls, we are bound to be torn down
allowing passage to the innocence around

fine attired words collide and
significance
our fear won't comprehend

sleeper visions curb the sanest mind
clouds of dust spreading to the sky
and a lightning storm will always rage inside
erasing all the thoughts our memories decide

fatal placement in denial
significance
I fear to comprehend
"this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
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Comments

  • fascinating organization there.

    I'll need to read it a few more times to really grasp the deeper ideas in that, but it says a lot to me.
    All I know is that to see, and not to speak, would be the great betrayal.
    -Enoch Powell
  • I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.
    "this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

    NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
  • i dig it too.
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