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Last Drinks

PerceptualPerceptual Posts: 200
edited December 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Wrote this song a while back... tell me what you think...


He could be out of his head
drink & pills until the sun comes up
you think he's tired, but he's wired
and he's feeling for a ride

last drinks are called
final poison before he
hits the wall
this love he could not save
lives to die again some other day

cause it's just in & out of bed
repitition till the sea dries up
you'd think he's tired, but he's wired
and he's dreaming of a ride

lines blur, the road becomes a canvas
where he paints his final picture

last words are called for
final poison before he
hits the wall
or
worse
next time he'll be so brave
just tell god to give another one away...
"this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
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  • PerceptualPerceptual Posts: 200
    It rhymes too much doesn't it? I knew it! Damn my non-creativity.
    "this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

    NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    i think its perfect
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • libragirllibragirl Posts: 4,632
    deadnote wrote:
    i think its perfect

    I agree
    These cuts are leaving creases. Trace the scars to fit the pieces, to tell the story, you don't need to say a word.
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