saviour

Perceptual
Perceptual Posts: 200
edited February 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
it is inside everything
drop your jaw and make you grin
it's in the air, it's all around
take a breath it moves in and out
it's the cure in your brain
come on in, we'll stop the pain

I wish I knew that I was trying to say
that only good people can save the human race
oh what a disgrace
we've been lost without a trace

it is inside everything
deadly bleach for human sin
in the air, all around
you're breathing it in and out
wear the cure in your brain
toxic thought you must refrain

I wish I knew that I was trying to say
that only good people can save the human race
oh what a disgrace
lost without a trace.
"this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
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  • genie
    genie Posts: 2,222
    Perceptual wrote:
    good people can save the human race

    yep, great line :)
  • midnight tunes
    midnight tunes Posts: 96
    I like your work, Perceptual....
    love is free
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    i like where this is going :) it's grabbing for truth, and that rocks it
  • Brainofdz
    Brainofdz Posts: 1,617
    Perceptual wrote:
    deadly bleach for human sin

    I love that line.

    Nice job as a whole, but that line especially engaged me
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.

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