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triumphant return

PerceptualPerceptual Posts: 200
edited March 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
grasping special language
somebody thought in two
rising to the challenge
of defeat enflaming passion
your confidence is broken
our misdirection spoken
in words we find so sweet
goddam

words are meat
sold so cheap
...mystery...
you can't keep
all hands... on board
all hands... ignored

funny wrapped in bandage
roll under, over, through
defiled in your mansion
defeat is straining fashion
in confidence, by token
our misdirection spoken
an upgrade of your theme
goddam...

version three
psycho creep
energy
lost in sleep
all hands... on board
all hands... implored
"this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
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  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    Godamn, Perceptual
    Maybe I should take a week off
    and come back dropping some truth like you just did
    Great job my friend.
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • PerceptualPerceptual Posts: 200
    thanks... I'll see how it goes but I've got less creationism in me lately. It'll come back, and it already is.
    "this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

    NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    This one is rather mysterious, but interesting. :)
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