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Perceptual
Perceptual Posts: 200
edited March 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
quietly command a distracted hand
running and forming the chorus
in weather not fit for reason
with all the patience of the sun

electrical touch, whispers within
if there's no god there is no sin

quickly supress the meanings
dressed in the colours of battle
universe dreaming of infinite space
expanding around the centre ---> you

electical touch, whispers within
if there's no god there is no sin
"this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
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  • Jamal
    Jamal Posts: 2,115
    Very well written
    quite cerebral, I like that
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    totaly awesome..what a great piece to have read..thanks for sharing it..
    more please..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    This one is interesting, but I don't know what it's about! :)
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