of angels and demons

Perceptual
Perceptual Posts: 200
edited April 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
she lays on sheets of white
gentle is her stare
scrutinise what isn't there
a scent so lovely
so... everything

she calls to me from a dark room
fire in her eyes
burning up the lies
intoxicating scent
she's everything

it's light and dark, fearing my part
crawling and splitting the waters apart

lightning
in lands faraway where kings die to stay

darkness,
in places so close, in torture... to most
"this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
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  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    I like this one. :)
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  • Brainofdz
    Brainofdz Posts: 1,617
    To convince someone of the beauty you see in them can be an impossible thing

    Cheers to those who try anyway

    and the piece is great BTW
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    this rocks..yea its good..i like her lingering scent which intoxicates her
    hungry manly animal..her fiery eyes must burn with a gentle glow..
    nice is your writing that i visualize..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce

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