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Corners

TrixieCatTrixieCat Posts: 5,756
edited August 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Full of cobwebs
Empty of your things
My voice echoes when I call down the hall
My footsteps echo in my head
And the other corner
That room at the end of the hall
With the door closed
I open it
Full of boxes
And cobwebs in the corners
Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    TrixieCat wrote:
    Full of cobwebs
    Empty of your things
    My voice echoes when I call down the hall
    My footsteps echo in my head
    And the other corner
    That room at the end of the hall
    With the door closed
    I open it
    Full of boxes
    And cobwebs in the corners

    i like
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • TrixieCatTrixieCat Posts: 5,756
    chadwick wrote:
    i like
    Thank you.
    This one cuts to the bone. :(
    Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
    And I don't feel right when you're gone away
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    TrixieCat wrote:
    Thank you.
    This one cuts to the bone. :(

    it seems like it would do that, yes.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    TrixieCat wrote:
    Thank you.
    This one cuts to the bone. :(

    and its those ones that are the best. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • TrixieCatTrixieCat Posts: 5,756
    catefrances wrote:
    and its those ones that are the best. :)
    That belongs in the wtf thread. :(
    Sucks to be down sometimes.
    Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
    And I don't feel right when you're gone away
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    TrixieCat wrote:
    That belongs in the wtf thread. :(
    Sucks to be down sometimes.


    no no trix. im not cartwheeling over your downness. being down does indeed suck. tis just when we write with raw feeling, that when its the best... the writing, not the feeling. well.. i find that anyway. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • TrixieCatTrixieCat Posts: 5,756
    catefrances wrote:
    no no trix. im not cartwheeling over your downness. being down does indeed suck. tis just when we write with raw feeling, that when its the best... the writing, not the feeling. well.. i find that anyway. :)
    No, no, I knew what you meant.
    I meant it sucks butt that our 'best' work is always done when we are down. That sucks. I wish I could harness the extreme happiness I feel. But I guess there is nothing cathartic in saying how good you feel. At least for me.
    Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
    And I don't feel right when you're gone away
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    TrixieCat wrote:
    No, no, I knew what you meant.
    I meant it sucks butt that our 'best' work is always done when we are down. That sucks. I wish I could harness the extreme happiness I feel. But I guess there is nothing cathartic in saying how good you feel. At least for me.

    ok cool. :)

    im afraid extreme happinesss would be enough to explode my head.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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