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TrixieCatTrixieCat Posts: 5,756
edited June 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I am a fuckup
Dont know what to do
I wish I could fix it all
Or die of the Avian flu
Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away
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  • TrixieCatTrixieCat Posts: 5,756
    ...
    Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
    And I don't feel right when you're gone away
  • failedpersephonefailedpersephone Posts: 3,424
    ???
    IF YOU WANT A PLATE OF MY BEEF SWELLINGTON, YOU'RE GOING TO HAVE TO PAY THE COVERCHARGE.
  • igotid88igotid88 Posts: 27,998
    TrixieCat wrote:
    I am a fuckup
    Dont know what to do
    I wish I could fix it all
    Or die of the Avian flu

    I was that was for me. But I know it's not.
    I miss igotid88
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    god dont make no junk

    even though i smile with insecurity
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • jamie ukjamie uk Posts: 3,812
    The greatest people on this earth
    don't know their value, or their worth
    The kindest people I can tell
    think only of others, not themselves.
    I came, I saw, I concurred.....
  • dunkmandunkman Posts: 19,646
    TrixieCat wrote:
    I am a fuckup
    Dont know what to do
    I wish I could fix it all
    Or die of the Avian flu



    doesnt even rhyme.. and where is the iambic pentameter?
    oh scary... 40000 morbidly obese christians wearing fanny packs invading europe is probably the least scariest thing since I watched an edited version of The Care Bears movie in an extremely brightly lit cinema.
  • Steve DunneSteve Dunne Posts: 4,965
    peace in your mind
    gives you peace in your soul

    peace in your heart
    will make you whole
    I love to turn you on
  • TrixieCatTrixieCat Posts: 5,756
    I just want to say thank you for all of your kind words...except you dunk. :p
    I am just having a rough time of it and I wasn't allowed to edit my "poem".
    This is a kind gathering of people and I really appreciate your support.
    It really is a wonderful community here.

    And failedpersephone...:o Thank you for letting me bend your ear. For someone to reach out the way you did means alot to me. You are a wonderful person, though gross at times. ;)
    A finer female there never was. :)
    Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
    And I don't feel right when you're gone away
  • igotid88igotid88 Posts: 27,998
    TrixieCat wrote:
    I just want to say thank you for all of your kind words...except you dunk. :p
    I am just having a rough time of it and I wasn't allowed to edit my "poem".
    This is a kind gathering of people and I really appreciate your support.
    It really is a wonderful community here.

    And failedpersephone...:o Thank you for letting me bend your ear. For someone to reach out the way you did means alot to me. You are a wonderful person, though gross at times. ;)
    A finer female there never was. :)

    yet i get ignored.
    I miss igotid88
  • Steve DunneSteve Dunne Posts: 4,965
    igotid88 wrote:
    yet i get ignored.

    let it be.
    I love to turn you on
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    sorry liz , i wished that you wouldve stayed
    ed in dearborn
    even if im shy i could still see how youre doing

    hillsong music is my favorite right
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • TrixieCatTrixieCat Posts: 5,756
    deadnote wrote:
    god dont make no junk

    even though i smile with insecurity
    I always thought this was one of the coolest things you have said.
    Just wanted to say. :)

    Also, I hope people will remember that FailedPersephone and Dunkman really are wonderful souls. Both of them helped me during a really rough patch in my personal life.
    I hope to see them here again soon. :)
    Thank you again.
    Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
    And I don't feel right when you're gone away
  • TrixieCatTrixieCat Posts: 5,756
    Feeling the blues again.
    This is so hard.
    Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
    And I don't feel right when you're gone away
  • LizardLizard Posts: 12,091
    sorry.
    So I'll just lie down and wait for the dream
    Where I'm not ugly and you're lookin' at me
  • TrixieCatTrixieCat Posts: 5,756
    Lizard wrote:
    sorry.
    thank you
    :(
    I am just really down.
    Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
    And I don't feel right when you're gone away
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    TrixieCat wrote:
    thank you
    :(
    I am just really down.

    I don't believe we've ever traded messages, but um.
    I understand and I know what feeling really down feels like.
    I think we all do.
    With that said, it doesn't make it any easier for you.
    Time doesn't heal all wounds but in your time I hope yours are.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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