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this is weird, just wrote it, makes no sense

gue_bariumgue_barium Posts: 5,515
edited September 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
head in hand,
looking as...
good friend
the only time i see you
i'll bet you're betting
on what brings you in

it's alright

empire blessings
on one knee
if i told you
she loved me

she spins a story
as old as eden
welcomes me into
until i'm spent

now i know
she's heaven sent.
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  • 15 minutes15 minutes Posts: 50
    I concur.
    I've never met Ed,never shook his hand, talked to him or had my picture taken with him.
    But I did stay at a Holiday Inn Express last night.
  • gue_bariumgue_barium Posts: 5,515
    15 minutes wrote:
    I concur.
    okay.
    a work in progress.
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  • gue_bariumgue_barium Posts: 5,515
    gue_barium wrote:
    head in hand,
    looking as...
    good friend
    the only time i see you
    i'll bet you're betting
    on what brings you in

    it's alright

    empire blessings
    on one knee
    if i told you
    she loved me

    she spins a story
    as old as eden
    welcomes me into
    until i'm spent

    now i know
    she's heaven sent.

    wtf?
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  • wolfbearwolfbear Posts: 3,965
    I like it. :)
    "I'd rather be with an animal." "Those that can be trusted can change their mind." "The in between is mine." "If I don't lose control, explore and not explode, a preternatural other plane with the power to maintain." "Yeh this is living." "Life is what you make it."
  • gue_bariumgue_barium Posts: 5,515
    wolfbear wrote:
    I like it. :)

    thanky. i'm glad you do.

    It's kind of skeletal right now, some potential there, i think.
    kinda floaty-ok for now. :)
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i like it, makes perfect sense to me.
    write on.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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